WWW: good topic, good use of pictures.
EBI: choose the topic of conspiracy rather than J Cole, not enough to talk about in between slides, mention the definition of illuminati and also more media text need to be mentioned.

What can I do to improve it?
I think I could turn my presentation into top quality by choosing a slightly different topic. I also think I could've added more information as I had many pauses throughout the presentation. I could've also expanded on the media terminology used.